1.1 After the fall
Nothing has been the same since the accident. All wildlife has gone. There are no plants, no trees, no grass, no animals, no fish. We eat our food from cans and packets. We have no electricity, no gas. We store our food in larders, we cook our canned meat on small charcoal fired grills. The hospitals and dentists lie empty, with no staff to man them. Where there were schools and colleges and universities and museums, there is now a makeshift hut in which a group of volunteers try their best to educate the few remaining young in the town. The name of our town almost feels a cruel joke when I look out at the dusty, ashy, toxic wasteland around us. Welcome to Riverview.
My name is Alf Lazarus. It wasn’t my name before, but everything has changed now. I am not the man I was before. For one thing, the toxicity made me ill. I nearly died. It has left my skin permanently disfigured, turning it this lurid green colour. I look alien. I feel alien.
I chose the name Lazarus to represent my belief that we can raise Riverview from the ashes. I believe this town can live again. I work for the military corps, and together we are hoping to restore some order to our streets. The mob have the run of the town right now, menacing us all for what little spare cash we own. The civilians either run wild, looting the empty properties, or they hide in their shelters, afraid. It is my job, and the job of my team, to restore a sense of order. There are only five of us so far, but perhaps when others see how we are dedicated to the future of our once beautiful home, then maybe they will join our cause.
There is not much to do in Riverview these days. Most of the buildings were destroyed by the accident, and the toxic atmosphere means it isn’t safe to be outside for any length of time. We can only travel if we have access to a vehicle, but the mob are controlling the supply of cars and charging extortionate fees. I cannot yet afford one, so I get a lift to and from work and spend the rest of my time alone in my shelter. To keep myself sane, I exercise. I am afraid for my health, afraid what the accident has done to me. I am afraid because the water is poisoned and we must boil it to drink it. I am afraid for my own life and for the future of my children, should I have any. I don’t even know if I am able to any more.
I am not the only one affected by the fallout. People all around have skin discolouration, missing limbs, hair that is falling out, clothes that are merely rags. We are a damaged people, cut off from other towns and cities. They are afraid of us.
There are people working for the good of the community. Local artists paint grass and flowers and rocks and rainbows on the pavements. People open their shelters to those in need. We share food when needed. There are signs of hope, signs that one day we will defeat this blight on our town.
August 3, 2009 at 4:22 pm
I’m liking this! Great job
September 19, 2009 at 5:06 pm
Very good writing and I like Lazarus already!
September 23, 2009 at 11:08 pm
I won’t spam you with a comment on every entry but I just wanted to say, just wow. You’ve really captured the desperation of the people in this chapter. I am intrigued and completely hooked.
October 20, 2009 at 7:08 pm
Big smiles. This is well written, Rad. Are you playing for points, story, or both.
October 20, 2009 at 9:33 pm
It’s not for points as such – am playing to lift restrictions. The only real ‘scoring’ is how long it takes but there aren’t any points to count other than that. There are 19 restrictions to lift – 3 have been lifted so far according to the blog (and 2.7 when I write it will see another one lifted).
November 10, 2009 at 3:29 am
Wow….what a crazy little world. I can’t wait to see how you pull this off!
November 23, 2009 at 3:48 am
Nice intro Rad. Wow, its like everything is gone. Can’t wait to read more.
December 15, 2009 at 5:04 am
Wow, great beginning! The premise is really interesting and I can’t wait to read more.
December 15, 2009 at 9:40 am
Hey, good to see you! Hope you enjoy x
December 22, 2009 at 5:24 pm
Very dark beginning. I like it a lot.
April 3, 2010 at 4:02 pm
Oh wow. How have I not read this before? Excellent beginning, full of intrigue. Clearly I have a lot to catch up on!
(PS – I’m updating the Emmetts again, if you wanted to know what happened with Summer et al (: )
April 5, 2010 at 8:59 pm
Oooh yes, lots to catch up on. Good to see you here.
May 20, 2011 at 3:52 am
Wow! I’ve never seen a Legacy from this point of view!
Congrats!
PS Please look at my legacy!
May 20, 2011 at 11:47 am
Thanks – an apocalypse is an interesting twist on an old theme.
June 3, 2011 at 7:47 pm
I agree with the other commenters — this is really well written. Good concept for a story and you’re off to a great beginning.
June 3, 2011 at 10:16 pm
Hope you like the rest